Land Transportation Changing? What Happened to Indonesia?

The Outline 
 

Topic : How has globalization changed Indonesia? 

Topic Sentence : There are changing in Indonesian three land transportation vehicle as the result of globalization.
Supporting Sentence 1 : Globalization changed the car technology which impacts the car creation and development by Indonesian student.
Supporting Sentence 2 : Indonesian people started using hi-tech motorcycles instead of bicycle.

Supporting Sentence 3 : MRT (Mass Rapid Transit) electric train operation in Jakarta by globalization on hi-tech train technology. 

Concluding Sentence : The creation and development of domestic brand car, the use of high-tech motorcycle, and MRT operation in Jakarta are three changing in Indonesian land transportation as the result of globalization.

The essay
       

 

Changing in Land Transportation? What Happened to Indonesia?

          Based on Cambridge Dictionary, transportation is the movement of people or goods from one place to another. As the development of technology and the effects of world globalization caused changes in transportation system and transportation vehicle. There are changing in Indonesian three land transportation vehicle as the result of globalization.
           Globalization changed the car technology which impacts the car creation and development by Indonesian student. Delman is a land traditional vehicle pulled by horses which used since 1800 in Indonesia. After the use of delman, ‘simple car’ which used diesel machine had been used in Batavia (Jakarta in colonial era) in 1970. Because of globalization in car technology, Indonesian students started to develop a domestic car called ESEMKA since 2007. With globalization and advancement in technology, Indonesian students are capable to create and develop domestic car. 

           Indonesian people started using hi-tech motorcycles instead of bicycle. Before the use of motorcycle, people used bicycle. As the development of bicycle to high-tech motorcycle in Japan, globalization had made Indonesian people started using motorcycle to simplify their daily work. It explained that globalization has affected the use of high-tech motorcycles by Indonesian people.
          Mass Rapid Transit train operation in Jakarta caused by globalization on hi-tech train technology. Before the MRT, Indonesia used steam train (1864-1925). Globalization had introduced electric-engine trains in 1925. It began to develop in 1972. Indonesia began to construct MRT operation since 2010 until now. It is useful for people of Jakarta-crowded-areas for time efficiency. Technology advancement due to globalization produced MRT technology which is used by Indonesia.
          In summary, globalization has affected the transportation in Indonesia. The creation and development of domestic brand car, the use of high-tech motorcycle, and MRT operation in Jakarta are three changing in Indonesian land transportation as the result of globalization.

Creating Outline from Specific Topic

Creating Creating Outline from Specific Topic before Creating Formal Essay

Topic : How has globalization changed Indonesia? 

Support Sentence 1 : In Indonesia, globalization changed the technology of the car.  

Support Sentence 2 : MRT operation as the result of change caused by globalization.

Support Sentence 3 : Motorcycle with advance technology as the result of change in transportation technology.

Concluding Sentence : The car, MRT operation, and Motorcycle are three major land transportation technology as the result of globalization in Indonesia

Creating a Good Paragraph into 5 Paragraphs Essay

Create an outline after making a good paragraph

Introduction Paragraph (1st Paragraph)

• Thesis statement : In my leisure time, there are three of my favorite activities to get rid of boredom in my leisure time.

2nd Paragraph

• Topic Sentence : The first activity is singing my favorite songs.

• Major support 1 : I really like to sing to acoustic song.

• Minor supports :
•  Acoustic song solely or primarily uses acoustic string instruments.

• Major support 2 : I usually sing any favorite songs by John Mayer, Nadin Amizah, and Adhitya Sofyan songs.

• Minor supports : 
• "-stars" by Nadin amizah, "New Light" by John Mayer, and "Forget Jakarta" by Adhitya Sofyan are the list of my favorite song.

• Major support 3 : By singing my favorite songs, I can express my feeling and feel relieve which made me enjoy my leisure time.

• Conclusion sentence : Singing to my favorite song is the first activity that i like to do in my leisure time.

3rd Paragraph

• Topic Sentence : Watching movies or TV series is the second favorite activity.

• Major support 1 : I love to watch romance and comedy genre of movie.

• Minor supports :
• It bring me joy and easy to understand because the plot is usually not really complex and easy to understand.

• Major support 2 : Other than that, I really like to watch action and mystery genre of TV series

• Minor supports : 
• It brings me challenge to predict their next story or action after seeing a problem.

• Major support 3 : By watching movies or TV series, I can learn about many good values which I could practice in my daily life.

• Minor support sentence :
• I can learn about the advantage of being wise in choosing something in life and being careful in taking any decision because it can bring much impact to my life.

• Conclusion sentence :Enjoying the story of life by watching movies or TV series is my second favorite activity.

4th Paragraph

• Topic Sentence : The last thing I love to do is dancing.

• Major support 1 : Copying the choreography from Korean girl or boy band and from international choreographer is really.

• Minor supports : 
• I usually dance to BTS, I*Zone, Red Velvet and many other korean girl or boy bands' choreography.
• Matt stevanina's choreography is choreography that I love to copy.

• Major support 2 : My favorite international choreographer is Matt Stevanina

• Minor supports : 
• Matt always packs up his choreography into easy but looks complicated movements..

• Major support 3 : Other than that, i also love to dance to my hometown traditional dance, which is Balinese dance.

• Minor supports : 
• Since i learn about Balinese dance in kindergarten, I can say that dancing to Balinese dance is my hobby.
• I can dance and keep my culture as Balinese people.

• Conclusion sentence : Move my body to the song with specific choreocraphy is my third favorite activity.

Conclusion Paragraph (5th Paragraph)

• Conclusion Sentence : By singing, watching movies or TV series, and dancing, I can enjoy my leisure time really nice without getting disturbed by the feeling of boredom.

Create an essay after making the outline

Three Favorite Activities

          In Wikipedia.com, Leisure time is time spent away from business, work, job hunting, domestic chores, and education, to do recreation which can refresh your mind. Leisure has often defined as free time. People tend to enjoy their leisure time to spoil themselves to do their favorite activities. In my leisure time, there are three of my favorite activities to get rid of boredom.

          The first activity is singing my favorite songs. I really like to sing acoustic song. Acoustic song primarily uses acoustic string instruments. I usually sing any favorite songs by John Mayer, Nadin Amizah, and Adhitya Sofyan songs. "-stars" by Nadin amizah, "New Light" by John Mayer, and "Forget Jakarta" by Adhitya Sofyan are the list of my favorite song. By singing my favorite songs, I can express my feeling and release stress which made me enjoy my leisure time. Singing to my favorite song is the first activity that i like to do in my leisure time. 

          Watching movies or TV series is the second favorite activity. I love to watch romance and comedy genre of movie. It brings me joy and easy to understand because the plot is usually not really complex and easy to understand. Other than that, I really like to watch action and mystery genre of TV series. It brings me challenge to predict their next story or action after seeing a problem. By watching movies or TV series, I can learn about many good values for my daily life. I can learn about the advantage of being wise in choosing something in life and being careful in taking any decision because it can bring much impact to my life. Enjoying the story of life by watching movies or TV series is my second favorite activity. 

          The last favorite thing to do is dancing. Copying the choreography from Korean girl or boy band and from international choreographer is really challenging. I usually dance to BTS, I*Zone, Red Velvet and many other Korean girl or boy bands' choreography. Matt Stevanina's choreography is choreography that I love to copy. My favorite international choreographer is Matt Stevanina. Matt always packs up his choreography into easy but looks complicated movements. Other than that, i also love to dance to my hometown traditional dance, which is Balinese dance. Since i learn about Balinese dance in kindergarten, I can say that dancing to Balinese dance is my hobby. I can dance and keep my culture as Balinese people. Move my body to the song with specific choreography is my third favorite activity.

          In summary, by singing, watching movies or TV series, and dancing are my favorite activity to enjoy my leisure time. Singing my favorite songs can express my feeling and release my stress. Watching someone's story through movie or TV series is my second favorite activity. Move and dance my body with hip-hop and Balinese dance song is my third favorite activity. I can enjoy my leisure time really nice without getting disturbed by the feeling of boredom.