Land Transportation Changing? What Happened to Indonesia?

The Outline 
 

Topic : How has globalization changed Indonesia? 

Topic Sentence : There are changing in Indonesian three land transportation vehicle as the result of globalization.
Supporting Sentence 1 : Globalization changed the car technology which impacts the car creation and development by Indonesian student.
Supporting Sentence 2 : Indonesian people started using hi-tech motorcycles instead of bicycle.

Supporting Sentence 3 : MRT (Mass Rapid Transit) electric train operation in Jakarta by globalization on hi-tech train technology. 

Concluding Sentence : The creation and development of domestic brand car, the use of high-tech motorcycle, and MRT operation in Jakarta are three changing in Indonesian land transportation as the result of globalization.

The essay
       

 

Changing in Land Transportation? What Happened to Indonesia?

          Based on Cambridge Dictionary, transportation is the movement of people or goods from one place to another. As the development of technology and the effects of world globalization caused changes in transportation system and transportation vehicle. There are changing in Indonesian three land transportation vehicle as the result of globalization.
           Globalization changed the car technology which impacts the car creation and development by Indonesian student. Delman is a land traditional vehicle pulled by horses which used since 1800 in Indonesia. After the use of delman, ‘simple car’ which used diesel machine had been used in Batavia (Jakarta in colonial era) in 1970. Because of globalization in car technology, Indonesian students started to develop a domestic car called ESEMKA since 2007. With globalization and advancement in technology, Indonesian students are capable to create and develop domestic car. 

           Indonesian people started using hi-tech motorcycles instead of bicycle. Before the use of motorcycle, people used bicycle. As the development of bicycle to high-tech motorcycle in Japan, globalization had made Indonesian people started using motorcycle to simplify their daily work. It explained that globalization has affected the use of high-tech motorcycles by Indonesian people.
          Mass Rapid Transit train operation in Jakarta caused by globalization on hi-tech train technology. Before the MRT, Indonesia used steam train (1864-1925). Globalization had introduced electric-engine trains in 1925. It began to develop in 1972. Indonesia began to construct MRT operation since 2010 until now. It is useful for people of Jakarta-crowded-areas for time efficiency. Technology advancement due to globalization produced MRT technology which is used by Indonesia.
          In summary, globalization has affected the transportation in Indonesia. The creation and development of domestic brand car, the use of high-tech motorcycle, and MRT operation in Jakarta are three changing in Indonesian land transportation as the result of globalization.